But I think I’m gonna shorten it a bit. It doesn’t have a nice enough flow right now. I’m not satisfied.
I heard somewhere that captions are bad. That real comic artists use dialogue and visuals to tell the story and not litterary text in captions. I don’t agree, Sandman for example is packed with caption-text and I love it, but still, I wanted to try avoid using captions for this story. As an experiment. It resulted in a text that’s really annoying on the first 2 pages.
These three pages are allright though. I will be cutting and pasting a bit to tighten it, and get the essentials out of it, but I like her faces and her body language in these panels. Hähä, “Det där blev ju inte så braaa…”